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The woman sighed heavily, wishing for a railing to lean against and settling for the shoulder of the man next to her.  "Why did she have to do this?" she murmured to herself.

Her companion didn't answer; she'd trained him well enough that he knew not to interrupt her musings-sorry, soliloquies.  But he did roll his eyes and think to himself that if she had actually paid attention to something other than herself-admittedly, a frightful, dangerous, and possibly life-threatening concept-she would have noticed that her daughter-the 'she' to whom the woman had referred-had absolutely no talent in any of the artistic professions and a great deal of talent for piloting.  Although she did have some areas in which she could use some training…such as landing.

But because the woman was famous and rich and he needed the money, he kept his lips closed over his response and ignored the rest of her irritated rant-soliloquy.  He silently wished her teenage daughter luck; it took guts to turn down an acceptance to such a wildly famous music school and go instead to the only place in all the world where she could be made a cyborg.  If ever I have a chance to ride the ship you pilot-for surely you will be a pilot cyborg-I will tell you in person.  For now, good luck, Tznt'ja.
©2009-2010 ~MoreaGaara
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:iconlucifers-uke:
the evil mother...well, at least the future cyborg pilot has good luck and got away from a selfish parent...but maybe the mother just didn't understand and wanted her dreams to come true through her daughter...

Sadly, some people have kids just for that purpose.

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Sandalphon has the Oedipus Complex from Hell.
Literally.
~morea

If you throw up on me, I swear I’ll turn you into a pretzel.
~Lucifer Fagan

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:iconweirdobagel:
Is it required to be a cyborg to be a pilot? I got a bit confused there, but otherwise I like it. Although, that's a very unique name and I won't even try pronouncing it haha.

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Kris: This is amusing to no end
weirdobagel: shut up! XD I'm having a good time....XD the random thoughts in my head are throwing up all over the keyboard
weirdobagel: .....that may have been worded strangely in retrospect
:iconmoreagaara:
just say 'cynthia' because that's what i butchered to make it.

the answer is, no, it is not required. however, ships are flown with a team of two. one human, one cyborg...the ships are sentient and because of the planet's history, things that are artificially intelligent require a cyborg intermediary...i refer you to the genesis of the cyborgs, [link]

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:iconmoreagaara:
the mother's dream was that her daughter would be her little clone...aka, a very famous 'movie star' is the closest thingy to what she is.

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I say "thanks for the fave" by faving.

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:icontedzerds21:
Very interesting premise, it sounds dystopian and futuristic - cyborg pilots - unique concept. Is this a flash fiction or something you're working?
:iconmoreagaara:
well, it's an unofficial project; i have a lot of things in the archives of my brain, and they usually get called on when i do writing prompts...of which i get about three a week, and which i am still behind on, as a matter of fact. i really should be doing some more...but then, i should also be working on my schoolwork. that's life, eh?

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I say "thanks for the fave" by faving.

It is an absolute truth that all truth is relative.

"I wuv fragments. They are awesomeness on a stick!!" =Artheeria
:icontedzerds21:
Lol totally I know what you mean. But I think it's good to take the time to do stuff you love like awesome writing, otherwise it's just work work all the time and you know what they say about all work and no play. ;)
:iconmoreagaara:
yes. it kills my muse and forces months of no writing. i'm doing my best to keep up, and i should be able to catch up when winter break finally rolls around.

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[link]
Save my dragons! Click above to do so!

I say "thanks for the fave" by faving.

It is an absolute truth that all truth is relative.

"I wuv fragments. They are awesomeness on a stick!!" =Artheeria
:iconlucifers-uke:
so, mother wants her child to be her, just younger, and maintaining the legacy...

wondering who you are referencing...because there are so many to pick from....

--
Sandalphon has the Oedipus Complex from Hell.
Literally.
~morea

If you throw up on me, I swear I’ll turn you into a pretzel.
~Lucifer Fagan

[link]
SAVE THE DRAGONS!!!! CLICK ABOVE TO DO SO!!!

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