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31 Writing Prompts--Can't

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Abaddon Lucifer

"I wanted you to know/That I love the way you laugh/I wanna hold you high and steal your pain/Away…"

Abby, why does Belial keep singing that one?  
Evenstar asks silently from 'is bed, where 'e 'ad been for the past month and would stay for the next three.

I just shrug.  I've no idea, Evey-love.  But 'e wants to, so…

Evenstar then sighs heavily and flops backwards.  I'm bored.

Deal with it, and stay stiller!  
Raphael snaps from the kitchen, where 'e was making the various salves and healing medicines for both Evenstar and Lizzie.  Neither of whom make very cooperative patients; Lizzie keeps wanting to go to a 'ospital, which offends Raphael, who always goes into a tirade about 'ow Angelic medicine is far more advanced than 'uman medicine and 'ow dare she want some snot-nosed 'uman doctor when she's already being treated by the Archangel Throne 'imself…and so on.  Evenstar, by contrast, wants to sculpt and/or paint, both of which activities would involve 'im leaving the bed.

We're not sure which irritates Evenstar more:  the fact that Raphael refuses to let 'im do anything, or the fact that Raphael's even there and treatin' 'im like any old patient.  Of course, Evey strikes back at Raphael over both irritants by somehow managing to do what 'e wants anyway.

'is most recent sculpture was clearly meant to embarrass Raphael.  It succeeded admirably.

Can I have my sketchbook please, Abby?  Evenstar asked, smiling as cutely as 'e could, given that 'e was still a bloody mess.  I grin, knowing 'e plots more evil, and pull it out from under the bed--which is where I and Satan 'ad also stashed 'is sculpting and painting tools.  Raphael still 'adn't caught on.  Thank you, 'e said very prettily when I gave it to 'im.

Angels are slow, Mephis observed, having woke enough to roll over and expose 'is other side to the sunlight streaming in through the window just behind 'is chosen napping spot.  In full view of Lizzie, who was now asking Satan if it was normal for 'im to sleep so much.

"Oh yeah.  He generally sleeps about twenty hours a day.  He's actually been pretty wakeful today, considering," was 'is answer.  "And Raphael's going to be even pissier if you don't drink that tea."

Evenstar is thinking pensively, so I decide to leave 'im to it and go downstairs to watch what could be a very interesting fight between Lizzie and Ray.  She stands up for 'erself quite well.  "But it's orange," Lizzie was saying.

"Would you prefer blue?  I can make you blue," Raphael is wearing a very tight grin.

"Stop it, Raphael," Belz tells 'im firmly, and Raphael turns away from them both and starts grumbling in Angelic instead.  "Lizzie, please spare yourself yet another rant about how much your species sucks, and drink the tea," he continued.  She sighed, but obeyed.

"Can't argue with an angel doctor," Satan observed aloud for Lizzie's benefit.  She snorted into her empty cup.

"I am a healer, not a doctor."
i present to you the least weird of what has been coming out of my muse recently. it is a follow-up to "forget".

i'm still debating on whether to submit the one i showed you, uke....

"Broken" belongs to Amy Lee of Evanescence and Seether, not me.

This is part of the 31 writing prompts thing which i've listed in my journals. for the others, clickies teh links:

:mangapunksai:01. letter: [link]
:mangapunksai:02. sticks and stones: [link]
:mangapunksai:03. birthday: [link]
:mangapunksai:04. immortal: [link]
:mangapunksai:05. circus: [link]
:mangapunksai:06. abandoned: [link]
:mangapunksai:07. nosebleed: [link]
:mangapunksai:08. mother [or father, or both]: [link]
:mangapunksai:09. sunrise: [link]
:mangapunksai:10. distraction: [link]
:mangapunksai:11. habit: [link]
:mangapunksai:12. fuck: [link]
:mangapunksai:13. love: [link]
:mangapunksai:14. waste: [link]
15. skinny
:mangapunksai:16. eyes: [link]
17. white noise
18. impulse
19. addiction
:mangapunksai:20. desecrate: [link]
:mangapunksai:21. death: [link]
22. low
:mangapunksai:23. heartbeat: [link]
:mangapunksai:24. first kiss: [link]
:mangapunksai:25. tomorrow: [link]
26. sweet
:mangapunksai:27. fog [or mist]: [link]
:mangapunksai:28. can't: [link]
:mangapunksai:29. village: [link]
:mangapunksai:30. time: [link]
:mangapunksai:31. forget: [link]

and don't forget to read the original story: [link]
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"Angels are slow..." ...offering :iconteaheeplz: and nonsense. Rahael = :shakefish: ...:+fav: